day 1
after a good flight with bad food we came to Canada where a bus waited for us to drive us to Fairmont Le Chateau Frontenac where we shut live they next days
the hotel was awesome and there was a pool and a fitness centre.
We had 2 good days there but we shut further so we took to Parc national du Mont-Tremblant national park where we walked in 3 hours and i was a fantastic walk and we saw some beautiful waterfall and mountains and the river was so beautiful and we will never forget this now we are sitting in the hotelroom
Justin Bieber concert!
Today is the day!
The Justin bieber concert is coming up.
We drove 16 miles
from the hotel, to the park were the concert later would be performed.
There were a massive
line infront of the park! Young girls were screaming as loud as they could
''Justin Bieber! Justin Bieber!''
There were tent's
and bagpackers everywere.
We finally got in!
My brother went to get banners and a T-shirt. I was so scared that he would be
lost, before he got to the shop.
Justin arrived at
the scene. Everybody was screaming.
''baby, baby, baby
ohhhh''
His voice was
incredible! Better than the videos on yotube!
The concert was
over. I was all like ''why?''
Air Canada centre
we were in Toronto, were we saw the Air Canada centre, we was told about some of the facts about the raptors.Toronto raptors:
Toronto raptors is one of the best team from Canada in NBA, if not they are the best?
The best player in Toronto and one of the best players in NBA Kyle lowry. Kyle lowry is one of the best player in Toronto's history, last year he had a the best stats of all point guards in the hole NBA. He had a shocking statistic at 21,3 the second highest of all time, in Toronto.
Right now Toronto is third in Eastern conference and is ready to the playoff games.
Torontos stadium/arena is air canada centre is placed in downtown Toronto.
Air Canada centre has been Toronto's home since 1999.Facts about Canada we were told:
Canada is the second largest country in the world (after russia) Canada have 10 million square kilometers
Canadas neighbours is USA and Greenland they have a coastline which is 244.000 km
Canada is a land in North America
in canada they have two languages. they have French and English in Canada they speak English in every state unless one were they talk french.
Quebec. The state where they talk french, Quebec is nearly 3 time bigger than Texas, Quebec are bigger than Alaska, which is the biggest state in USA. Quebec have a big interest in fishing many have a job where they work with fish. in Quebec they have a plan about how they will make their own power with economic development from the canadian shield.
In Canada they really like hockey and Football (american Football): Canadian football league the biggest team in the league is Montreal and Quebec. In Canada they also play soccer, the team plays in the Major League Which is the league in USA. The biggest team in soccer ist Montreal, they came in third place last year with a very weak squad.
Plant life in Canada varies with land type and climate.
Canada Day
Canada Day is the national day. falls on the 1 july it was that day Canada became a country
In 1867 four of Great Britain’s North American colonies joined together as a new country. It was called the Dominion of Canada. In 1879 a law made 1 July a holiday called Dominion Day. Canada gained complete independence from Great Britain in 1982. In the same year Canada changed the holiday’s name to Canada Day.
Canada’s history has produced a culture that, in its broadest sense, is a mixture of British, French, and American influences.
Canada has rich fishing grounds off both the Atlantic and the Pacific coasts.
Next time try to think about where you can put in a comma, and what do you mean with shut and live they next days. You goes from more than one person to one person. There is a lot of spelling mistakes. And the text is a little bit confused to understand. Why are you writing in different text colours? Are some of it copy pasted?
SvarSletWe think you needs pictures .
Next time try to think about where you can put in a comma, and what do you mean with shut and live they next days. You goes from more than one person to one person. There is a lot of spelling mistakes. And the text is a little bit confused to understand. Why are you writing in different text colours? Are some of it copy pasted?
SvarSletWe think you needs pictures .
We’ve only written some of the most important stuff.
SvarSletYour first sentence is: “fredag den 6. februar 2015”, you should definitely write this in English instead. Since it’s a diary, we suggest that you put dates in all your different blogposts.
You should always start a new sentence with a capital letter. Example: “after a good flight with bad food we came to Canada”. Here is how you should’ve wrote it: “After a good flight with bad food we came to Canada”.
“We had 2 good days there but we shut”. In this sentence there are two things concerning us. 1st one: “We had 2 good days”. We suggest that you write the letters t-w-o instead of the number ‘2’. 2nd, “but we shut”, we don’t get what you mean when you write ‘shut’. We’ve seen it quite a lot of times in your posts. When you wrote ‘shut’ did you then mean ‘should’? Because if not, we have no idea, what you meant.
Last comment on the first post: “Parc national du Mont-Tremblant national park”. You should either write “Parc national du Mont-Tremblant” or “Mont-Tremblant National Park”. This is because “Parc National”, means “National Park” in French, therefore should you choose on of those, instead of writing both :-D
Justin Bieber concert : We haven’t heard about the “brother” until now. Which kind of confused us when reading the post. Also you use many different kinds of persons like
“ I, we, they, “
Last post. There is no date.
“players in NBA Kyle lowry”. In the sentence you’ll have to write Kyle’s last name with a capital letter, like this: “Kyle Lowry”. We have yet another example: “air canada centre”. You should’ve written “Air Canada Centre”.